Monday, May 11, 2009
My boyfriend wrote this; he says it's his first poem..ever. But i don't believe him. Not one bit.
More than you know.
I love how i feel when i hold you tight,
How when my world gets dark,
you are always my light.
I love how you kiss me, the fireworks i see.
How when you're around,
it's no longer "i", but "we"
I love how every day, my love seems to grow.
I love these things more than you'll ever know.
I love how you talk, and the way that you walk.
I love when your eyes wander over to me,
how when you're in the room, you're all that i see.
I love how our love is not just a show,
I'd say that i love you, but you already know.
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8 comments:
ahhhh thats so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That's a great poem! He did a great job for it being his first poem ever. The both of you are great writters!
Have a nice day :)!
-SimplyShy
wow. thats oh so very sweet. =]
Oh my God, that's a great poem. I don't really believe that's his first poem, it's too good.
I love that! It was so sweet, and nice :-D
lol i know, right?!
he's pretty much a keeper :) ♥
That's really nice! I wish I could write poems like that. Then maybe Mrs.White wouldn't hate me so much!
That's gorgeously written, get him to write more lol :)
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